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i_love_the_cullens
06 November 2008 @ 07:17 pm
Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns the twilight characters, I don't. And Forks. And the school, the Volvo, the truck, all of it.
A/N: This is Bella's point of view unless I change it.
=)

Prologue

I stared out of the large glass window of my room onto the thick patio beneath me. I wasn't really staring at it, more like, in space. Since moving to Forks, life for me has changed, majorly. I feel in love with a vampire, have way more friends than before, I'm engaged and my dad doesn't know it yet, oh, did I mention I feel in love with a vampire? Actually, I think I might have. Oh, yup, I did. Edward Cullen, magnificent and smart, above and beyond beautiful and/or handsome, and a vampire. Not the kind that want to suck your blood and chase after you in vampire movies, or even the vampire bats... well, he's closest to that. Wait, no, I did not just compare Edward to a vampire bat! Oh, yes I did. He doesn't really come up to people and say, "I want to suck your blood!" or, "Come with me, I'll show you what vampires consider wine...your blood!". No, he's not like that.
He doesn't sleep in coffins, heck, he doesn't even sleep. He doesn't come out only at night like everyone says. He's normal, basically, except for the fact that he is a vampire. Well, I guess that means he's not normal at all. Well, lets just say he's not vampire like the movies portray them all to be. And he's not the only one, either. He's got brothers and sisters, even a mother and a father. Not biological, of course. But their all vampires, and that's what I love about them, their not the in the norm.




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Chapter One will be out in 3 or 4 days, tops. And that depends on whether or not I have any motavation for this story...haha...well, comments make my heart smile! And I give out cookies!
^_^
-Brooke
 





 

 
 
i_love_the_cullens
29 October 2008 @ 08:04 pm
Okay, I honestly hate trajedy fics, but, my best friend told me I'd be good at writing one, so I wanna know what you think.
I know, some best friends lie to make you feel better, but at least they try, right?
XD
Well, SasuSaku, fo sho.
Haha,
well, here it is.

Sasuke's POV

When Your Gone



Now, I honestly don't know what hurts more. 
Losing my clan, or the only chance of saving my clan.
Sakura.
I loved her, more than what she ever got to know.
No.
I never said a word.
I made her believe I hated her.
But, in the end, it didn't do me any justice...

I always needed time on my own
I never thought I needed you there when I cry
And the days feel like years when I'm alone
And the bed where you lie is made up on your side

I always pushed her away, acting like I didn't care.
Because, to be quite honest, I didn't.
Not until she confessed that night, it took all I had to leave her.
But no, I wasn't going to be sappy about it.
Nuh-Uh.

When you walk away I count the steps you take
Do you see how much I need you right now?

I left her there.
On that cold, hard bench.
And the last words she heard me say.
"You're still annoying."
"Sakura."

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
When you're gone
The face I came to know was missing to

When you're gone
The words I need to hear to always get me through
The day and make it okay
I miss you

That was it.
And here I am, the infamous Uchiha, broken.
She was my everything, to say the least.
When I was with Orochimaru, she was all I ever thought about.
I need to get home to her before it's to its to late. Sakura....
Those were my thoughts before I left Orochimaru.

Those were my thoughts while I was on my way to kill Itachi.
Those were my thoughts while killing Itachi.

Those were my thoughts on my way home.

I've never felt this way before
Everything that I do reminds me of you
And the clothes you left, they lie on the floor
And they smell just like you, I love the things that you do

When you walk away I count the steps that you take
Do you see how much I need you right now?

And once I got home?
She was already gone.
No good bye.
No nothin'.
I felt so bad that day, I... I remember the feeling I had, before I got there, thinking she was gonna be there.
I was happy for the first time in 8 years.
Since I was eight.
And that's a long time.

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
And when you're gone
The face I came to know is missing too

And when you're gone
The words I need to her to always get me through
The day and make it okay
I miss you

I see what she was talking about, now.
She was right.
Heck, I can't remember a time when she wasn't.
I'm lonely now.
No family.
Not even a simply possibility.
I'm the only Uchiha left, and the only one that will be until I die.
Then, the clan's done for.
But at this point, I could seriously care less.

We were made for each other
Out here forever
I know we were, yeah

And all I ever wanted was for you to know
Everything I'd do, I'd give my heart and soul
I can hardly breathe I need to feel you here with me, yeah


I might have Naruto, Kakashi, but it's all not the same.
And the worst thing, the worst thing of all, I never told her...
How much she meant.
Yeah, she always meant something to me, since the day
she told me she'd do anything for me.
But, after that night, after I left her on that bench, I walked away knowing she meant more than that.
I honestly thought she should move on to bigger and better things.

When you're gone
The pieces of my heart are missing you
And when you're gone
The face I came to know was missing too

And when you're gone
All the words I need to hear will always get me through
The day and make it okay
I miss you

But who was I kidding.
I love her.
And she meant more to me than that.

And the next day, after his realization, about 2 weeks after Sakura's death, and about 3 days after Sasuke's arrival back in Konoha, Naruto came to the training grounds to find a dead Uchiha, the 'last' Uchiha, like I said before, dead ontop of Sakura Haruno's tombstone.

Oh, I miss you.
Ohhhh, I miss you.




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Song: When You're Gone -Avril Lavigne


Comment, Tell me how I did.
-Brooke






 

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i_love_the_cullens
19 October 2008 @ 08:15 pm
Sasuke laid himself down on the black couch, propping himself up with a nice, fluffy, red pillow. 'How the heck does she do this?' he thought, eying his wife as she cleaned the kitchen and cooked up a more than likely delicious, mouth watering meal, and she still had enough time to babble on and on and on about work.
But some how, Sasuke found it strangely attractive. Sasuke watched as she lowered the spatula slowly to the dark brown frying pan. And had a duster in her left hand, dusting the light brown cabinets in their kitchen.
Sasuke never really realized how beautiful his life had become since the day he decided to come back to Konoha.
Here he was, a beautiful wife, beautiful home, and great friends.
Of course, Sasuke wouldn't admit that to anyone.
After all of this, he still couldn't swallow his Uchiha pride, and probably never was going to.
Well, according to Sakura, that is.
Sasuke brutally forced his eyes down into the book he was reading, Overcoming Stress.
Sasuke really had no interest in the book at all, none whatsoever, but Sakura would not leave the poor man alone until he agreed to read it.  Her exact words to him, 'Being an Uchiha, you shouldn't be under stress. If I remember correctly, your mother was one of the most stress free women of Konoha! Along with your brother and father. And if you plan on having Uchiha heirs and heiress' you mustn't be stressed, Sasuke. You know that!'
She made him hate the fact that he'd ever stressed out over his brother in the first place.
She had told him there were many different ways he could've handled that, he could've let Konoha deal with it, or just have waited.
But she won that battle a long time ago.
No, Sasuke wasn't scared of his wife, but he was damn sure scared of what she was capable of doing.
No, the Uchiha wasn't stupid, either.
Sasuke had argued with her over that before, he'd given up after a while. She wasn't going to let it rest until she hade won. So he let her win.
No, Sasuke Uchiha did not lose that battle without purpose.
.......................
Okay, maybe a little bit, maybe she was right, maybe she really had won.
But, the past is the past and he couldn't change that.
And secretly, even though he'd never tell Sakura this, he wouldn't change the past.
At all.
And even wi-
"Uchiha Sasuke!" Sakura scolded, slamming her spatula against the dark green marble kitchen counter, brows furrowed, giving him that innocent but yet angry Uchiha look, the one his mother used to give him when he was a kid.
"Are you listening to a single word that's coming out of my mouth?" She asked angrily, pink brows now raised instead of furrowed.
Sasuke looked up at her with a smirk and just sighed.
"Honestly? This book is more interesting than your small talk about work." Sasuke said simply, with no emotion, looking back down to his book, that infamous smirk not leaving his face.
Sakura simply let go of her spatula and took a wet rag to her hands.
"Whatever...dinner's ready," She said, looking down at the kitchen counter with a small smile on her face.
But not the kind she usually gives when he replies with smart remarks, which, of course would be a guilt smile.
No, not an angry one.
She was actually giving a smile.
And that is rare for something like this.
No, not rare, but rather unusual, as in, first and last time Sasuke will ever see it.
Well, at least from a rather simply argument.
Sasuke raised a black brow, peering at her through his thin, black, wired reading glasses.
She stood at the dark wood kitchen table, pouring sweat tea into Sasuke's drinking glass.
She then poured herself a cup of lemonade, then set the plates out.
Sakura felt Sasuke's stare directing towards her, and looked up.
"What?" She placed a small, hand on her hip, her pink nail polish standing out against her red shirt and blue jeans.
She cocked her pink eyebrow and raised her top lip a bit, you could see her left canine tooth.
Sasuke just starred at her, smirking.
After a few seconds into the awkward stare-down, Sakura looked back down to what she was doing.
"Your food's getting cold. Hurry up and ea-"
"There's something you aren't telling me," Sasuke was behind her in a quick flash of a second, his left hand on her back. She gasped as he moved it to her small shoulder.
"Well, it's complicated, Sasuke." Sakura said lightly, hands sprawled out on the kitchen table.
"Don't give me that, you didn't argue with me over a smart remark, unusual. Then you smiled about it, strange. And now there's something you aren't telling me; disturbing considering I tell you everything." Sasuke explained slowly, moving his hand back down to her back and repositioning himself on her right side.
"Okay, Sasuke, promise me this, you won't be upset..." She trailed of as she started to tremble.
She turned to face him and took his hand in her own.
Sasuke, who'd normaly pull away from this situation, just nodded.
"Just tell me, Sakura. It isn't bad, I knew that the minute I touched you, you tremble when you have news...good news." He informed her, nodding again to reassure her he wouldn't be angry.

"Well, Sasuke, I'm pregnant."
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i_love_the_cullens
10 October 2008 @ 08:25 pm
Title: The Truth Discovered
Chapter: 1
Summary: Just a short time after the fight on Mustafar, Anakin discovers that Padme and his children are still alive.
Author's Notes: Nothing really here, just saying that this IS suit less Vader. No suit. Regular Anakin.
No, he didn't get out of that fight completely and totally fine, though. He does have some not so pretty injures, but other than that, he's fine. This is all Padme/Anakin or Anakin/Padme.
(Cross Posted)


Last Chapter: <a href="http://brooke-sasusaku.livejournal.com/1705.html">The Truth Discovered(Prologue)</a>
And if the link doesn't work, then look in my journal.
:D




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Chapter 1

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Padme really had no clue whatsoever why she <u>ever</u> agreed to this.
Awkward?
Yes.

The ride to Mustafar wasn't so bad, but once she was on the planet?
She couldn't even begin to explain.

Once they arrived on the planet, the babies immediately started crying because of the loud noises and
the volcanoes erupting and shaking.
'This is a disaster already...' She thought, and sighed.
C-3PO carried Luke's chair, with a screaming Luke in it, kicking and crying.
"Oh-dear! Mrs. Padme,-what -are we -to-do? This -baby -wont -stop -screaming -in -my -ear!" C-3PO complained, his voice just as shaken and robotic as ever.
Padme sighed and took the other carrier from C-3PO.
"Just don't worry about it." Padme shrugged.
Just then, a group of men came out with guns pointed towards them.
Palpatine waved his hand, and few of the guards hesitated, but they surrendered.
Padme had just held her breath.
'I should've stayed home!' She mentally yelled at herself for being so selfish.
"Are you taking us to see Anakin immediately?" She questioned, stopping for a quick moment.
She had been tired.
Walking around just a little bit with two 10 to 15 pound babies wasn't as easy as it looks.
Palpatine smirked to himself, to were Padme couldn't see him.
"Just a minute, Senator." He answered, not really intending on doing as he said, obviously.
"I have a feeling you aren't taking me were you say.." Padme scoffed under her breath, breathing long and hard. It was hot there, whether they were inside or not.

"No, Senator. He's right this way." Palpatine frowned.
"Wait here," he waved his hand in the air and Padme stopped.
'Maybe I should make a run for it...Anakin did teach me how to fly a while back.' She thought spontaniously.
"Lord Vader! Come!" Palpatine yelled softly into a darker looking room.
Padme really couldn't make out the figure walking to the door from the thin walls, but as soon as he barged out, they recognized each other.
Leia and Luke stopped crying so hard and sat still for the least bit of a moment.
Padme wasn't going to take a chance and sit them down right then and there, so she just smiled at Anakin,
wanting to run into his arms and tell him how much she loved and missed him.

 Anakin gasped at the sight that he saw.
"I need glasses, this isn't real.." he whispered, as his eyes started to sparkle.
They just stood there starring at each other, Palpatine just smiled that evil smile.
"I'll leave you two alone. Or should I say, you four. Padme, if you don't mind, you'll be staying with Lord Vader until further notice." Palpatine set off done the long dark hallway, his black clock following him.

 Padme quickly walked beside Anakin and set the babies and their things down, the jumped to Anakin.
"I thought I'd never see you again!" She cried into his cloak, smiling and crying tears of happiness.
Anakin just held her there for a moment and whispered that he loved her over and over.
Padme stood there for a moment, taking his scent in.
"I love you too," she said, smiling.
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Anakin frowned at his daughter.
She was giggling and had a fist full of his hair in her hand.
Anakin smiled at her and tried to untangle her hand from his hair.
Padme sat on the bunk and smiled at the sight.
She was busy changing Luke, while her other child was playing with her father.
"She acts just like you, you know," Padme's smile grew wider.
She was honestly happy because her family was all together finally.

And that was all that mattered at the moment.

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Okay, this chapter sucked.
I really just woke up about 3 hours ago, and this is what popped in my head.
It was chessy.
It was short.
And it has poor grammar and language.
Not enough detail...
I'll edt it later.
I would defenatly like some constructive cridisism for this chapter.
Please?
LoL.
 Tell me if you liked it, tell me how you feel.
=D

-Brooke
 




 
 
i_love_the_cullens
08 October 2008 @ 04:31 pm
Before I start this story, I'd like to note that critiques are ALWAYS welcome. Just try not to make it to harsh.

=D

Sasuke is 20, because I think currently he's actually 16 or 17 in the manga, so yeah.
Sakura is 19.
=D
Disclaimer: Since I seem to always forget about these, I'm going to go ahead and get it over with!
xD

This plot is Masashi Kishimoto's, Sasuke and Sakura are his, just not the other 2, their children.
I made them up.
:D
 

Well, that's about it for author's notes. This is a one-shot unless someone convinces me that it should be other wise, as in someone will have to tell me they actually want it to be a chapter series.
So please just put yes or no on your comment if you'd like to be apart of that.
=D

Thanks!
-Brooke
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For All Of The Kisses And Hugs...


The 20-year-old black-haired ninja raced home. He stopped for a moment on a tree branch, just starring at how beautiful
Konoha had been.


 'Why did I ever leave this place?' he questioned his self, then shrugged. 
I'd better get home...
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Sasuke stood in front of the Uchiha Estate door and sighed.
He quietly opened the sliding glass door, just to see Kimata and Kimoto playing with their toys.
"Kimoto! Give that back to me!" the advancing Uchiha yelled towards her brother, neither of them noticing their father in the doorway.
Kimoto was already half way dow the hallway with the childs barbie doll, trying so despratly to pull the head off.
Sasuke just raced his eyebrows.
'And they just had to get older... the terrible 2's' Sasuke thought, then smirked.
Kimata froze imediatly and turned to face her father.
"Daddy!" She yelled, jumping to Sasuke.
Sasuke quickly caught her and sighed.
"I missed you!" She exclaimed to her father, rapping her arms around his neck, hugging him.
"I missed you too, taisetsu," Sasuke inquired, holding his little girl in his arms.
Sakura, hearing all of the camotion, decided to walk down stairs.
"Now, Kimoto, I thought I told you to-" She stopped after she looked at Sasuke's smirking figure.
"Sasuke!" she ran across the living room and across towards her husband.
"Akachan.." Sasuke smirked as he let his 2-year-old down to the floor.
Sakura rapped her arms around Sasuke neck and kissed him for a long time.
Kimata just giggled and sat on the couch as she 'watched cartoons'.
Sakura felt Sasuke smirk during their kiss, obviously because of Kimata.
Kimoto walked into the living room tryumphantly, throwing the doll towards his sister in two pieces.
She just sighed and picked it up.
She thruw it into the trash and quickly ran towards her box FULL of dolls and pulled one out to play with it.
Sasuke didn't quite understand what had just occured until about a minute later, after starring at Kimoto.
 Kimoto didn't notice his father until he felt eyes on him.
Sasuke broke their kiss and held Sakura there for a quick moment.
"It's about your bedtime, kids." He said, smirking in Sakura's hair.
"Okay.." Kimata quickly put her doll up and walked inside of her room to get ready for bed.
Kimoto followed but went to his own bedroom.
Sasuke smirked and let Sakura go.
"I need a shower..." he smirked and pulled at Sakura's hand to follow him.
"Not tonight, Mr.Uchiha, I'm tierd." Sakura smirked and faked a yawn.
"Oh, don't give me that.." Sasuke grabbed Sakura's hand and swung her up into his arms, bridal style.
Sakura giggled and smiled.
"Well, I do need a shower..."

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After his and Sakura's 'shower', Sasuke was sent to go say good night to his kids.
He went into Kimoto's room and tucked him in and said goodnight.
He walked into Kimata's room, who had a confused look on her face.
"Daddy, I have a question." He green orbs starred at her father.
Sasuke was puzzled, but said, "Shoot,"
"Okay...some kid at daycare told me that you'd trade me, mommy, and nii-san if you could kill Uncle Itachi...is that true?" Kimata questioned, looking at her father as if she were confused....because she was.

Sasuke sighed and ruffled her pitch black hair.
"No, no I wouldn't." he paused.
"Who was it that told you that lie?" he asked her, sitting on her twin sized bed.
"Nijo Hyuuga." She spilled.
"Oh.."
"Well, I'd trade you for something!"
"What?"
"All of the hugs and kisses of the world from you!" She giggled and poked her father's hard chest.
"Oh, really now?" He smiled at her and tickled her.

"Okay, well, goodnight taisetsu," he smiled at his daughter.
"Goodnight Oto-san,"
 


 
 
i_love_the_cullens
07 October 2008 @ 06:30 pm
Title: The Truth Discovered
Chapter: Prolugue
Summary: Just a short time after the fight on Mustafar, Anakin discovers that Padme and his children are still alive.
AUTHORS NOTES: Anakin doesn't fall into the lava in this fanfic, but then again, there's a reason why its a fanfic.

xD

He does have some horrible injures, but nothing more than that.
Darth Vader just gives me the chills, sorry.
lol.


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Prolugue


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Anakin could not believe his ears.

The words re-played slowly in his head.
''Senator Amidala is not dead by any means. I just needed Anakin to believe me...We need him in the sith. No distractions are wanted. We will have his children here for sure... the force is strong with them." Anakin could have cried.
'They lied to me after all of this...' Anakin sat on his bunk, staring at his blank and mechanical hands.
He cleenched his fist.
'I knew it, something inside of me told me she was never dead...' Anakin looked at the blank spot on his flesh hand, staring at it, remembering the last time he actually touched his love, held her in his arms.

'You'll pay, Palpatine, you will pay...I asure you,' He thought, letting two tears scilently fall.

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Padme walked into the nursery were 2 cribs were,  one green, the other yellow.
'He was right..we had a girl,' Padme sighed as she looked at her children.
She rapped her hair up into a ponytail, then let it fall back into place, just like her husband would've.
'I miss you...' She leaned back in her pale white rocking chair and frowned.
She ler her right palm rest on her left hand, just as she always does.
Then, she felt a presence.
"Why, hello Senator Amidala,'' She heard a voice.
She quickly got up and turned on the light.
"Who...who's there?" She questioned, not the least bit shocked that no one revealed themselves.
She just about tripped on a plushie toy.
"Palpatine, my dear," Just then Palpatine appeared in the doorway.
"What do you want? You've taken the father of my children away from me! I need him back! They need him more importantly.." Padme shouted, not holding back.
Palpatine just smirked, holding onto a ball ontop of Luke's crib for support.
He walked forward, heading towards the intersection between the two twins.
Padme gasped, "If you touch them, I asure you it'll be the last time you touch anyone." She warned, stepping quickly infront of the cribs.
"You know, my dear,-"
"Stop calling me that and get out of my house!" Padme yelled, fighting to hold her tears back.
"As you wish, but my proposition only holds its value today, Senator Amidala," Palpatine inquired, walking slowly towards the door,
watching Padme with every step he took.

"Wait, what?" Padme questioned cocking her head in confusion.
He stopped infront of the door.
"You see, my dear Senator, I'd love to re-unit you and your children with your husband. If you'd just come with me, then I give my word,
you will have your husband."
He knew exactly how to lure her in.
Padme didn't even think about it.
"Yes, yes anything for my love, anything. Just...just promise me one thing." Padme looked at him suspisously.
"You will not touch my children at all. Nothing. I'd rather you kill me then them. Don't lay a finger on them or else." Padme frowned, meaning exactly what she had said.

There was a long, scilent pause.
"Yes yes of course my dear. That has already been promised." Palpatine let off a small smirk, touching her shoulder.
"Very well then."
"We leave in an hour." Palpatine declared, for this was a new journey for Padme and her children.

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Did you like it?
Padme has always seemed like the stuborn type to me, so I guess I tried with that.
Comments make me smile and rant and rave about cookies.
:D
LOL.
 


 
 
i_love_the_cullens
06 October 2008 @ 08:55 pm
Hey ev eryone! I'm writing this new fic, 'Through Her Eyes', for myself, and others to either enjoy or just read to help me out.
Rating? T I guess,
Characters? Sasuke Uchiha, Sakura Uchiha, Miko Uchiha.
POV? All of the above.


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Through Her Eyes
Chapter 1



Miko scowled as she meandered around Konoha about 5 minutes after school ended.
'You know, would it kill them to act like parents once in a great while?' she thought to herself, strolling her way home.
She walked in thought about her parents, and compared them to other minors parents.
Sure, her parents were proud of her.
Sure, her parents 'loved' her.
But they just expected to much out of her!
'That's the price you pay being an Uchiha,' her father would tell her.

Being an Uchiha!?!?!?

Price you pay???

Hold on a moment, I did not ask to be put in this cracked up, annoying, presure filled world, now did I?

Miko walked scilently among the people around her.
Yes, no doubt, she was the strongest among her class, and the senior class(12 year olds), and the rest.
But no.
She had to be better.
She had to be under sooo much presure she could of broke.
'Through my eyes, their evil pests under my skin,' she thought, rolling her pitch black eyes at the bare thought of her parents.
Now, try telling me that's not something.

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Miko sat on her bed, covering her ears over her parents screeches and cries at each other.
She shut her dark eyes as tight as she could, not ever wanting to open them.

"Why can't she just go do something normal for once?" She heard her mother, Sakura, the nicer of the two, the one
she actually liked, asked her father calmly.
"Sakura, I've told you and her so many times I can't count, she needs to stay on top. Deal with it. She's Uchiha, and she
will excel above all other normal children, whether she likes it or not!" Sasuke shouted.
Miko heard a loud slam against the wall.
"Sasuke! You're sheltering her just like your father did to you, don't you see? Sasuke, she's 5. Okay? 5. She is already stronger than any rokie I know, even Kakashi says so! Sasuke! Let her just do something social, and stop trying to make her become a social ice box like you!" Sakura yelled, her voice tired after yelling at her husband for so long.

"I don't care, Sakura! She needs to grow stronger...she's not even close to my standards! And I-"
"You what? You don't want her to have a freedom you didn't have! Sasuke, just step back and look at yourself! Maybe you'd see how much of a monster you're being towards her! Can't you see, Sasuke? She's 5! She's not going to make it into the rokie nine until she's at least 9, that's law. And you need to stop acting like she is one! Stop! She's 5! Let her go enjoy the world for once!" Sakura said softly, pulling at her left sleeve, the side with the Uchiha crest inprinted onto it.
Miko stood up, not once taking her hands off of her ears.
She stood to her feet and walked into the kitchen to get some orange juice, walking right past the two.
The two just watched their daughter in shock, seeing her crying amost brought Sasuke to tears.

Miko let her tears fall scielently, just walking to the small kitchen table with her newly-poured OJ.
Why were her parents so apaled?
Because she'd always hated when they fought over stupid stuff, and always yelled at the both of them for it.
Instead, she'd just sat down and quietly cried, drinking her orange juice.
Miko actually took this as a joke.
A big joke from God Almighty.
"You know, maybe I'll wake up from this nightmare soon," She whispered to herself, fully aware of the fact that both of her parents could hear her.

"What do you mean?'' Sasuke dared to break the scilence, glarring at the 5 year old.
"You two, fighting over me. Like I'm a dog, father, you treat me as if I were a mere dog! And even if I were, you'd say the same things, a different format. That's it. You'd say, 'Oh, she can't go to the park, even if she is trained!'. Doesn't that sound obserd to you, father? Well, if not you, it does to me. And that's exactly what you're doing now! Making a big deal out of nothing! It's one Satuday, I miss one practice, which I'd make up for either once I'm home or the next day. It's Ika's birthday, and she'd really like me to go, ask aunty Ino! 2 hours of me being gone, hmm, doesn't suprise me at all. You want me all to yourself.
Why? Because father, you're insecure. I'm the only actually Uchiha besides you and Madara, who doesn't even really count.
And you don't want anything to happen to me. Which is fine. I understand that. And in any of this, if I have dis-respected you or mother in any way, please forgive me. But you know, father, its the dead truth. And I'm tired of being sheltered at the mere age of 5. Weren't you?" her words stung him like a wasps deadly sting.
Sasuke starred at his daughter, at the very least, he was shocked by her words.

Sakura smirked, seeing Sasuke had been affected by the child's words.
Boy, did her daughter have him rapped around her little finger.
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Did you like it?
It prolly was a little to deep, exspecially because of her age, but she's Uchiha, what more could you expect?
xD

It might not have made scene either, because at the beginning she said she hated her parents.
But honestly? This story is about the 3 of them building trust and confidence in one another.



 
 
i_love_the_cullens
05 October 2008 @ 04:31 pm
Before I start..
I'd like to thank everyone who commented!
And thank you nekowriter for the encouragement and saku_uchiha, too!
:D


Recap*********

Sasuke watched as the girl who'd once loved him stomp off.

'Grow up, go to Hell, and I HATE you!!' Those words played in his head for about 5 minutes until he finally understood.

He'd finally gotten her message.

She hated him, and that was the end of that.

End of Recap*******

When A Cheery Blossom Hates You...


Chapter 2
The Beggining of A Great Battle


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Sasuke just stood there for a moment, dumbfounded.
He just watched as Sakura's disappearing form...well, disappeared.
His eyes followed her body until she was completely out of sight.
'Damn,' he thought, looking up at the night sky.
He walked slowly to his old apartment, hoping that the residence was still his.
And surely enough, it wasn't
'Damn it!'
His day was not going well at all.
'I'm Uchiha, I can deal with this,' Sasuke thought and rolled his eyes at his witless atempt to greet his team-mate.
Sasuke glared  at the set of apartment buildings, as if he could burn a hole through the thick material holding the wall together.
'Well, since I can't go home, maybe I should go to the Hokage's office and just accept my penalties and punishments,' Sasuke thought, then that little but brave voice jumped at him about it.
'You know, Sasuke, that girl was right. You are a dumb idiot, and the way you're talking to yourself at this moment doesn't sound like you,' Inner Sasuke smirked at his own words, believing that he'd fooled Sasuke.
'So, all-knowing-inner, what do you think I should do then?' Sasuke questioned his inner, raising a black eyebrow in confusion.
'Well, be the man your parents tried to bring you up to be and go apologize!' Inner Sasuke said  loudly, hoping his exterior would reply.
'Well, if you're me, you know that I dont apologize no matter what I've done! That bastard I'm forced to call my brother never apologized to me for killing my family, so why should I even dare to apologize for something as feeble as me telling her earsplitting, obnoxious mouth to shut the hell up?' Sasuke thought, starting to cring at the mere thought of apologizing.


He hated the mere thought.

He
, an Uchiha, would not apologize to a mere Haruno.

Nope.

Once she was his,

Wait, he thought.
I did not just say once she was mine, he thought.

Inner Sasuke just smirked, looking at his oh-so-'dirty' fingernails, trumphantly.
'And the denial process begins,' The inner decided, chuckling at his choice of words.

"Ughh!" Sasuke snarled at his inner, ignorant to the fact that it wasn't in his head, he actually snarled.

Crap.

People started walking to the front gate, startled by the sound, but Sasuke was way to quick for them.
And of course, at the front of the crowd, was the yellow headed ninja they all knew as Naruto.
"What was that?" Naruto screeched, obviously ready to fight and 'defend the village'.
Sasuke just smirked that sly smirk he has as he hid behind the bushes, concealing his soaring chakra levels.

'Come on Naruto. Just fall for it..' he thought, then shook his head, knowing all to well that Naruto might be dumbfounded most of the time, but when it came to this?

No.

"I'm not falling for it! Come out...." Naruto paused for the slightest bit of a second,  smiled a snug smile, and continued. "Sasuke Uchiha." he finished, rushing in to search for him.

Shit.
Sasuke bounced up and off of the ground, onto a 23-foot-high tree branch.
As he stood, Sasuke started to feel the branch cringle under his weight.
He smirked as he saw Naruto's tan face starring at his ghostly white one.
"You.." Naruto snarled, then growled.
"You bastard!" Naruto bellowed, all of his angier flushing into his words.
'Crap, he's coming for a kill,' Sasuke thought, frowning.
"I'm gonna kill you Uchiha!!" Naruto shouted to the black-haired missing nin.
Yup.
Sasuke closed his dark eyes, sighed, and jumped off of the branch, landing as a cat would have on his feet.
He yawned.
"Bring it, dobe." Sasuke smirked, and held his left hand stiff behind his back, and positioned his right one to were he looked like Rock Lee in the chunnin exams.

The wind rustled as the two stood before the Konoha gates, waiting to fight.
Oh yes, it was time to fight.

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i_love_the_cullens
29 September 2008 @ 08:25 pm

Hey Guys! This chapter was written a while ago, as was this story.
xD
I wrote it in June, which is probably why its not the best.
I stopped then, so I'm just now starting to write the 2nd chapter.

 fanart: fanfiction

Recap************

'Pace yourself Sasuke!' He thought vicously to hiself.

Sasuke arrived about 2 hours later, expecting a warm, opening welcome.

Well, he was dead straight wrong.

End of Recap**************

Chapter 1

Rude Awakening

Sasuke was at the least suprised by what had just occured. He was more so startled than anything. He had been returning, and just as the gaurds jumped at him, his old team mate, Sakura Haruno, had stopped them. She'd just simply put her hand out infront of him, and didn't say anything.

He had tried to hug her, and she'd just slapped him silly.

And thats why he was so startled and surprised.

Sakura Haruno, the girl who would've died to just have a hug or a kiss from him,

Sakura Haruno, who'd claimed a greater love for him than any girl in Konoha,

had just slapped him.

No, bitch slapped him.

Sasuke rubbed his numb face, trying to revive what had just happened in his head.

And surely enough, he did.

Sasuke's immediate reaction was to hit back.
His hand controlled itself for a tenth of a second or so, and then he brought it back down quickly.

'This is Sakura, Sasuke. You can't aford to hurt her....' he thought to hiself.

As he rubbed his face, Sakura just smirked widley.

"Are you....perhaps talking to yourself, Sasuke? You know thats a sign of insanity, and if you are, maybe we wont have to deal with you," Sakura smiled sarcastically at her words, satisfied, obviously.

"Just shut up!" Sasuke yelled loudly, looking around for any gaurds.

'Must've went to report my arrival to Lady Tsunade..' he thought, then grunted slightly.

Sakura looked a bit drawn back by his choice of words.

"Shut up?" She had said quietly, but thick.

"I have a right to be sarcastic and yell at you! You are a horrible person, Sasuke. You know that? You killed people just to get to one person! Millions of lives have been affect because of you! Its sad how a person could be so heartless! I don't even come close to think about calling you or your brother human! You've made tons of kids and adults, even babies, grow up without family members! YOU HEARTLESS BASTARD! And you finally have successed. Congrats! And you know what? I was sarcastic there, too! So are you going to tell me to shut up now? Huh you ignorant bastard of an Uchiha? Well, before you can even say anything, I'll tell you this." She paused for the slightest bit of a second.

"Grow up, go to Hell, and I HATE you!!" She yelled as loud as her tiny lungs would alow her.

Sakura stomped off into the darkness, considering it was approximantly 72 degrees outside.
'I'd better get home before this gets really ugly," She thought to herself, shivering.
 

Sasuke watched as the girl who'd once loved him stomp off.

'Grow up, go to Hell, and I HATE you!!' Those words played in his head for about 5 minutes until he finally understood.

He'd finally gotten her message.

She hated him, and that was the end of that.

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I will love you forever if you do!

I know, its a little, okay, maybe a whole lot of Sasuke-bashing.

But SasuSaku is coming!

Swear it!

haha.

-♥Brooke
 
 
i_love_the_cullens
25 September 2008 @ 04:42 pm
Hey everyone! This is my first story... so be easy please! But I would like a critique, just not to harsh. :D My )